Get the red pens out. I have posted up a few more letters (click the link above). These are a bit more challenging to write than my usual rambles as there is more discipline involved. I am trying to (a) pay more attention than usual to the words used (b) stick to 500 words (c) mix light, information and leave the reader thinking. Critical comment gratefully received. I am hawking these round some educational periodicals in the UK to see if they are interested. If I can promote VSO on the side, so much the better!